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Mithrun of House Kerensil ([personal profile] tablescraps) wrote in [community profile] altimit 2023-08-28 09:57 am (UTC)

( Mithrun's expression seems to say that development makes sense to him. Statistically (insofar as statistics applied to stories), the fox couldn't be the only lonely person in the city.

Sometimes, your own loneliness makes it hard to see out beyond it. Like clouds covering the stars, sure. Mithrun can buy that, in some abstract sense, without understanding maybe these are lessons that can apply to him, too. )


... That's not a bad story. ( It's got a beginning, a middle, an end, and a cohesive theme. ) It can still continue.

( There are a lot of others the fox can meet. There's sequel potential! More genuinely, though, he studies Sinclair for a moment, and sees those previous signs of tears and rage are faded from his face. That's an improvement. )

... There's probably a lot of people who'd enjoy hearing that kind of story.

( A lot of sad people, he figures. Sad, and lonely. )

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