What's wrong with what I decided to go with?

[ ganymede is here to suffer all by his lonesome. may he drag them off to the chaos gate or something in due time....

meanwhile uta will laugh at hani's counter. ]

But you're right; that's the basics of it. Metaphors are just ways to better describe concepts. There are some that can bring up some fun though puzzles. I wouldn't call the one that I picked being one of those.